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PunkMaister
Here is a sniplet from a BF fic I'm on the process of writting
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Katie and the Sasquatches

Prologue:
150 years ago a man was reportedly kidnapped by a family of Sasquatches and kept for a few days before he escaped. Much more recently a woman would not be as lucky as he was…

Katie Gordon was an expert hiker and outdoors survivalist but nothing had prepared her for what she was about to face that evening hiking deep in the untamed trails of the Pacific Northwest.

Chapter 1: The Encounter

From the moment she began hiking up that lonely mountain trail deep in the forests of the Pacific Northwest Katie felt the unease of being watched, at first she just shrug it off as a passing deer, then as the day progressed she thought it might be something more ominous like a bear or a cougar so she picked up a stick to fence any possible attack for all the good it would do against a cougar or a bear.

She cursed herself for leaving the cabin without a weapon. She picked a trail back to the cabin but knew it would take her a few hours back just before dusk to return. She continued at a normal pace to avoid making herself look like running prey to whatever was stalking her in the brushes and trees around the trail. By the time dusk was about to arrive and being about half a mile or so from the cabin Katie hears branches and twigs being violently shaken and thorn in the trees around the trail she is taking back to the cabin.

Nervously she takes a fighting stance with the stick looking around as the tress shake on both sides of the trail it is now that she realizes is not one animal but a pack of them whatever they were that had been stalking her for the good part of the day. Suddenly out of the corner of her eye she catches the glimpse of something massive jumping out of the woods right to where she is standing, before she can even react she is forced to the ground by something really heavy and foul smelling and a huge hairy hand covers her face which is all Katie manages to see before she loses consciousness.

Chapter 2: Kidnapped

Slowly but surely Katie’s senses returned she blinked her eyes and as they focused she realized she was staring at the night sky, she felt the cool summer night breeze all thru her exposed skin which she quickly realized was just about her entire body. Startled she got in a sitting position noticing she was for all intended purposes naked from head to toe. What little remained of her garments hanged loose on her shoulders and a small piece of nylon which was all that remained of her undies was still strapped to her right calve.


That’s when she noticed dark tall bipedal figures moving in the dark a few meters away from her, she could not make any details in the dim starlight. Katie realized that one of the figures was approaching her, as it came closer the figure came more into focus she also smelled a stench at the same time. Now Katie finally was seeing up close how one of the beings that had taken her captive looked like, the creature was 8 feet tall and covered with thick fur, the face was a cross between a human and an ape face or so she gathered.

She realized that for all intended purposes she had been taken by a group of no more and no less than the legendary Bigfoot or Sasquatch. The Sasquatch left something next to her and she realized it was a bunch of wild berries and dead bugs such as beetles and moths. Even though a survivalist Katie could not help but to be repulsed at first by the offering.

But she soon realized that she was without any kind of other source of nourishment so she picked a berry and nibbled on it, it was not bad at all she promptly ate it and went after the other berries leaving the bugs but as she did she realized that those bugs as nasty looking as they were would probably be the only source of protein for her in the foreseeable future so she nibbled on one did not found the taste so appealing but not that disgusting either.


So thoughts anyone?


BTW: This story when finished will be destined to a site that allows mature/adult content as it will get edgier and far more sexualized as the story progresses as you can see is based on the Native American Lore of women being abducted by our fave hairy bipeds and I applied the hunting/gathering behavior seen in other large primates such as chimps as well, plus accounts of sightings the works to make this piece.
peregrine
Well, my first thoughts had to do with spelling, punctuation, and run-on sentences.

I was reminded of the plot of Peretti's Monster as I read your snippet, although your Katie is the patent antithesis of Peretti's "Beck" character.

JMO
PunkMaister
QUOTE(peregrine @ Apr 1 2009, 02:10 PM) *
Well, my first thoughts had to do with spelling, punctuation, and run-on sentences.

I was reminded of the plot of Peretti's Monster as I read your snippet, although your Katie is the patent antithesis of Peretti's "Beck" character.

JMO

Wow being compared to the great Frank Peretti! I'll take that as a compliment! biggrin.gif
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